Digipak Draft

 

 

 

Front Cover

 

 Inside Panel

 CD Panel

Back Cover

 

 

Feedback

 

Miss Dughan

• No spine
• Inside panel doesn’t work the different sections make it clumsy
• Font on cover is weak
• Back cover and images are excellent
• Aim for 6 panels

Audience Feedback

 

 

 

 

Magazine Advert Draft

 

Feedback

Miss Dughan

• Aspect ratio?
• The font is too weak, Doesn't stand out
• Too many colours

Audience Feedback

• Writing doesn't stand out
• Blue Colouring at the top looks out of place
• Fits in with the rest of your ancillary
• Picture of Artist stands out
• The yellow and red colouring really stands out over the black and white backgrounds
• Haven't put when it is out, so could do that
• I like how the picture is of the artist, it stands out and also sells her.

 

 

 

 

 

Music Video Draft

Feedback

Miss Dughan

Really beautiful to watch  - lovely shots but needs greater variety – some cutaways to outside of the bedroom?

• Cuts suddenly at the end – can you dip the volume?
• Too much hair flicking
• 1.48 you cut to the next scene a split second too early as she is saying the ‘p’ of ‘cup’
• 2.16 lip synch out
• Don’t like the tears going backwards

Audience Feedback

• Try another Location
• More lip synching
• Like the idea of the heartbroken, Crazy character.
• Actor Suits the music video