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Friday, 12 October 2012

Music Video Draft



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Miss Dughan
Really beautiful to watch  - lovely shots but needs greater variety – some cutaways to outside of the bedroom?
  • Cuts suddenly at the end – can you dip the volume?
  • Too much hair flicking
  • 1.48 you cut to the next scene a split second too early as she is saying the ‘p’ of ‘cup’
  • 2.16 lip synch out
  • Don’t like the tears going backwards

Audience Feedback

  • Try another Location
  • More lip synching
  • Like the idea of the heartbroken, Crazy character.
  • Actor Suits the music video











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